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Analyzing Poetry
What is poetry? How is it analyzed? What are the elements of poetry? Good
questions! This web page provides a quick overview of poetry
analysis. Please note that this handout discusses the basics of poetry;
there is much more to know about it than there is room to discuss here.
Laurence Perrine's book LITERATURE:
STRUCTURE, SOUND, AND SENSE can provide more detailed information about
poetry analysis. Until you can get a copy of the book, I hope this page
helps you begin your poetry analysis work.
What is poetry ?
Poetry goes beyond the rhyming of words. The object of writing a poem is
usually to make a very complicated statement using as few words as possible;
as Laurence Perrine says, poetry "may be defined as a kind of language
that says more and says it more intensely than does ordinary
language" (517). Thus every word and stanza is packed with meanings.
Poetic language could be said to have muscle because, in a sense, it is
powerful. When a poet writes, he is trying to communicate with the reader in a
powerful way. He uses the elements of poetry to get his point across,
and these elements consist of a variety of ways to use words to convey his
meanings. In the analysis of poetry, then, two important questions the reader
must ask himself are: What is the poet trying to say? How does
he or she try to say it?
What does a poetry analysis paper look like?
Individual teachers may have specific requirements for papers written in
their classes. A critical analysis includes an introduction, a thesis
statement, perhaps a map of the essay, the body of the
essay, and a conclusion. The critical analysis paper will consist of a
proof or a demonstration of the thesis statement. Always begin with a thesis
statement, which usually appears at the end of the introductory paragraph. The
thesis of a critical paper should include a statement of the poem's theme;
everything in the body of the paper should apply in some way towards proving
the thesis statement.
In critical analysis, one looks both analytically and critically
at a short story, a novel, or a poem and makes an argument about what the
meaning of the story or poem is. What follows is a discussion of what the
words "critical" and "analysis" mean:
What is "analysis"?
It is helpful to think of analysis as decoding. Creative writers rarely say
what they mean in a straightforward, obvious way, and this is especially true
of poets. However, they are trying to communicate with readers. In
doing so they use a variety of tools to enrich their purpose, and these tools
are the elements of poetry. The combination of elements the poet uses
makes up the "code" of the poem. Analysis means literally picking a
poem apart--looking at elements such as imagery, metaphor, poetic language,
rhyme scheme, and so on--in order to see how they all work together to produce
the poem's meaning. By looking at a poem in terms of its elements, one decodes
the poem. This guide is to help readers learn what to look for and what
questions to ask in decoding a poem.
What does "critical" mean?
To criticize means to judge the merits and faults of a poem. Questions to
consider in this regard are: What has the poet done well, and what has he done
less well? Has he successfully expressed his theme? Has he written a
"good" poem or a "great" poem according to Laurence
Perrine's standards?
How do I get started?
- Read the poem more than once.
- Use a dictionary when you find a word about
whose meaning you are unsure.
- Read the poem slowly.
- Pay attention to what the poem is
saying; do not be distracted by the rhyme and rhythm of the poem.
- Try reading the poem out loud to get a sense of
the way the sounds of the poem effect its meaning.
Elements of Poetry
Denotation and Connation Words in poems have denotations, or
literal, easy-to-understand dictionary meanings, and connotations, or
figurative, less specific and less direct meanings. The latter is the more
important in poetry than the former. The figurative, or connotative, meaning
of a word means everything that the word might imply besides its
direct, dictionary meaning.
For example, the literal, denotative meaning of the word apple is
something like this: It is the fruit of the apple tree, anywhere from gold to
dark red in color, and it has seeds and a sweet taste. The literal meaning of
a word, its denotation, can usually be defined in simple, clear language and
can be understood right away.
The connotative meaning of a word, however, is much different. A red
apple in a poem is never merely a red apple, but probably implies a lot
of different things. The red color may symbolize passion, fertility,
anger--anything one can associate with the color red could be a possible
meaning. The apple itself could symbolize the Tree of Life, it could symbolize
knowledge, Adam and Eve and their Fall from Grace, the harvest in fall, the
forbidden, Sir Isaac Newton or Johnny Apple seed--perhaps a combination of
these things. In this way a poet uses a word or an idea in a poem to express a
variety of ideas at one time, and so deepens our experience.
Thus, in reading poetry one should look at words as having two kinds of
meaning. They have dictionary meanings, but also mean other things besides.
One should look at individual words and at phrases in the poem and brainstorm;
that is, one should think about the literal meanings, but then try to think of
every possible idea that the word or phrase could imply. Importantly,
words do not mean anything and everything in a poem. Thus the reader
should look at the poem as a whole and try to figure out which implications
make the most sense within that poem.
Imagery
Images are very concrete "word pictures" having to do with the five
senses--touch, smell, taste, sound, movement, and especially sight.
As Perrine points out, images make readers experience things vividly.
To figure out the imagery in a poem, the reader should first make a list of
every single mental picture, or visual image, that comes to mind as he reads
the poem. He can then go back and find other kinds of ideas that have to do
with physical sensations--sounds, tastes, smells and so on. Finally, he can go
back and think about all the ideas these different images could imply--figure
out their connotations, in other words.
For example, if a poet compares something to a ship, the reader might think
about what ships look like, and then think about what it feels like to be on a
ship. How do ships move? Where do they go? What sights, sounds, smells and
sensations can we associate with ships and being on ships? After thinking
about these questions, the reader can go back and attach these ideas that a
ship implies to the thing to which the ship is compared, and finally try to
fit these ideas into the overall meaning of the poem. See Emily Dickinson's
poem "There is No Frigate Like a Book" on page 575 of Structure,
Sound, and Sense.
Importantly, poets often place images in opposition to each other. This
creates what is known as "tension." Tension is often an important
clue to the meaning of a poem; it also creates drama and interest and is a key
to paradox (see below). One should look out for strange contrasts in
images in the process of analyzing poems, and think about the responses they
arouse in a reader. Images can be part of similes and metaphors, though they
are not always (see below).
Figurative Language
Figurative language involves a comparison between two things--a literal
term, or the thing being compared, and a figurative term, or the
thing to which the literal term is being compared. As Perrine states,
figurative language is a way of describing an ordinary thing in an un-ordinary
way.
Simile
A simile is an explicit, or clear and direct, comparison between two things
that are basically unalike using dead-giveaway words such as "like",
"as though", "seems", "similar to",
"than", or "as". For example, "The woman moved
like a fish--she moved as though she were as weightless as
a fish in water. Her movements were certainly as graceful and fluid as
those of a sea creature. She seemed ready to swim away at any moment, like
a startled school of fish." Here, the woman is the literal term,
while the fish, sea creatures, and school of fish are all figurative
terms.
Metaphor
A metaphor is a comparison that is not made explicitly--that is, it is not
made clearly and directly and is not made with clues such as "like"
or "as". It is, instead, an indirect comparison between two things
that are basically unalike. In metaphor, the figurative term is substituted
for or identified with the literal term, the thing being compared. This is
done to make the meaning of a poem more forceful.
For example, the expression "The apple never falls far
from the tree" contains a metaphor in which parents or family
(literal term) is compared a tree (figurative term), while children (literal
term) is compared to an apple (figurative term). The metaphor expresses that
children are never very different from the parents or family from which they
come. For further example, "The fire eye in the clouds
survives the gods" (Wallace Stevens) also uses metaphor. Here, the sun is
compared to an eye--one that has seemingly eternal life, and thus can watch
the full course of human events. Here, one figurative term is "fire eye
in the clouds" while the literal term is "the sun". The term
"eye" may give the reader the idea that the sun is kind of like a
conscious being, since conscious beings have eyes for purposes of perceiving
the world; what a thing "sees" it can presumable think about in a
conscious way. Also, the idea that the sun "survives" reinforces the
idea that it is like a living thing, though it is not, in fact living. See
also, "The Road Not Taken" and "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy
Evening," both by Robert Frost and appearing in Structure, Sound and
Sense. These are good examples of easy-to-understand uses of metaphor.
Personification
Personification is a kind of metaphor, and it means to speak of an impersonal
thing, such as a season, a natural element, any object, a country, etc., as
though it were a person. For example, look at the line from the popular
Seals and Crofts song, "Summer Breeze": "July is dressed up and
playing her tune." Here the month of July is spoken of as though it were
a woman. July is "dressed up", that is, July is in full
swing--flowers are blooming and butterflies are flying, resembling the pattern
of a summer dress. Also, to say that July is "playing her tune" is a
metaphorical way of saying that birds are singing and nighttime insects and
frogs are voicing their mating calls. Thus the figurative term, a woman in a
dress playing a tune, is identified with the literal term, a summer month in
which nature is at its peak of activity.
Synecdoche
Synecdoche is a way of naming a thing: the word for a part of a thing is
substituted for the whole. For example, in the sentence "I bought a new
set of wheels this morning," the word "wheels" is
substituted for the word "car." Wheels are part of any car; here the
part is substituted for the whole. The following are further examples:
"How do you like my new threads?" and "All hands
on deck!" both represent synecdoche.
Metonymy
Metonymy is a way of naming a thing: a thing closely related to the
thing actually meant is used to name it. For example, "He came
from excellent blood" substitutes the term "blood" for
"family", and expresses the idea that an individual comes from a
"good" family, perhaps a noble one. "Blood" and
"family" are related because families are made up of people who have
similar characteristics; people have blood, and people in families, being
related to one another, are often said to share the same blood. Furthermore,
"blood," a biological thing, is not part of a
"family," which is a cultural institution. However, blood,
part of the human body, can be substituted for "family," a group of
biologically related bodies. Thus the figurative term "blood" is
substituted for the literal term "family".
Symbol
A symbol means what it is, but at the same time it represents something else,
too. For example, "the straw that broke the camel's back" is
a symbol of a last, remaining bit of patience with a difficult, ongoing
situation.
Allegory
An allegory is very similar to a symbol. Laurence Perrine describes it in this
way: "Allegory is a narrative or description that has a second meaning
beneath the surface one. Although the surface story or description may have
its own interest, the author's major interest is in the ulterior
meaning." (597) What this means is that in addition to the surface
meaning of the poem there is also a more important, deeper meaning. Allegories
relate especially to subject matter from the Bible and from mythology. For
example, a garden in a poem may be not just a garden, but it may represent
also the Garden of Eden and all of the ideas that accompany the idea of the
Garden of Eden become potentially important in the poem. These might include
ideas such as the seven days of creation, paradise, utopia, the Fall of Man, disobedience, human rationality, God's power, Eve's origin as Adam's rib, and
so on. References to mythology are harder to catch because most Americans
simply are not familiar with Greek, Roman, and Norse gods and goddesses and
their stories. However, there are dictionaries of mythology in any public
library, so use one if need be.
Paradox
A paradox occurs when two things that should not be able to exist at the same
time are said, in a poem, to exist at the same time. For example, it is
impossible that it be both night and day, both spring and fall, both past and
present at the same time. If, however, one were to say that night and day
coexist in a poem, one would be expressing a paradox. Because human beings
frequently experience two or more emotions at the same time (mixed feelings,
ambivalence) or can see things from two points of view at the same time, they
often use paradox in poetry to express such a situation. For example, if a
poem were to say that the speaker of the poem is experiencing the past and the
present at the same time, this may mean that his memories of the past are so
vivid that the past seems to be existing in the present.
For example, "A poem should be palpable and mute/As a globed
fruit" (Archibald MacLeish, p. 650 of Structure, Sound and Sense).
This line expresses a paradox because poems are constructed through words--why
should a poem be "silent"? A poem has the "silence" of a
globed fruit because the poem should be able to communicate the non-verbal
aspects of the fruit (the things we experience without words)--the fruit's
roundness, its smooth or fuzzy texture, its sweet fragrance, its crunchy or
soft texture once it's bitten into, and so on. These are all things which are
not experienced nor understood in a verbal way but which a poem may
paradoxically communicate through words. Thus a "silent poem" is a
paradox.
Overstatement and Understatement
Overstatement is very similar to exaggeration. To say "You'll tear down
that house over my dead body!" is overstatement; what is actually meant
is that the speaker will do everything in his power to prevent the house being
torn down. He will probably not, in fact, submit to death in order to prevent
that from occurring.
Understatement is the opposite of exaggeration--one states less than one's
full meaning. To say "It is on warm side in July and August on the Gulf
Coast" would be an understatement. In fact, it is blazingly hot on the
Gulf Coast. See Burns' "A Red, Red Rose" and Frost's "The Rose
Family" on pages 611 and 612 of Structure, Sound, and Sense for
good examples of over- and understatement in poetry.
Irony
Irony is a situation in which one thing is said but another is actually
meant, or in which the outcome of a situation is the opposite of what one would
have expected it to be. Irony is packed into the line, "The fire eye in the
clouds survives the gods." Human beings are often said to create their
gods, beings frequently presumed by humans to be immortal, all-knowing, and
all-powerful because they are presumed to have created things like the earth,
the moon, the sun. Rather, this line of poetry emphasizes the mythical nature of
gods and goddesses; their existence, so to speak, is tied to a culture, and once
that culture has run its course, those gods can be said to have
"died". It is the sun, supposedly created by the gods, which actually
"witnesses" the passage of time and the events of human history. Thus
the opposite of what one would think to be the true situation is occurring: The
sun, not the gods, can make a better claim to being immortal and all-knowing
because it "watches" the rise and fall of cultures and of the gods
associated with those cultures. Furthermore, it is the sun which has, in fact,
inspired human beings to create gods in order to account for its existence. See
the section in Structure, Sound, and Sense that covers irony for good
examples of this element in poetry.
Meaning and Idea
Remember that a poem might be summed up in a literal, one-sentence statement,
a theme. Also remember that along with that simplified statement a poem has
other ideas connected with it. For example, "The fire eye in the clouds
survives the gods" means literally that the sun has a very long
"life expectancy" of several billion years. However, other ideas are
associated with this literal meaning; the line expresses ideas about the
nature of time, history and the "immortal" gods. For example
"the fire eye in the clouds" implies that the sun is in some way
godlike because gods are often said to live in the sky, among the clouds, on
mountaintops. Likewise, those aspects of the sun are represented here.
Furthermore, eyes see, and the idea of the sun as an "eye" implies
an all-knowing and perhaps all-powerful quality; for instance, God's eye is
depicted above a pyramid on US dollar bills, and so we are "one nation
under God." The words "fire-eye" allow us to experience the sun
in an entirely new way, above and beyond its being a star in the sky which
produces heat. (See above discussions of metaphor and irony.)
Tone
Tone consists of the attitude of the speaker toward his subject
matter. It involves practice working with the other elements--especially
under- and overstatement, language, irony, imagery, the meanings and
connotations (implications) of words--of poetry to judge the tone of a poem.
In assessing tone, nevertheless, one might begin by asking oneself the
following questions: Is the speaker involved or detached (uninvolved,
unemotional?) How does he seem to feel about his subject matter? Is the
speaker serious or joking, ironic or straightforward, condemning, approving or
dispassionate, lighthearted or depressed, loving or angry? Does the tone
change as the poem progresses? Is the tone mixed? For instance, is the speaker
at once sad and apprehensive, happy and nostalgic, loving and angry?
Musical Devices
To determine what musical devices are used in a poem, one should ask how
sounds are arranged and used in a poem. What sounds and words get repeated?
What are repeated but with slight changes? Is there rhyme? The following are
kinds of musical devices. Keep in mind that the vowels are a,e,i,o,u and
sometimes y, and the consonants are all of the other letters in the alphabet.
Alliteration--the repetition of beginning
consonant sounds For example, "Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled
peppers."
Assonance--the repetition of vowel sounds
found anywhere in a word For example, "mad as a hatter,"
"blackjack," "knick- knack, paddy-wack,"
"picnic"
Consonance--the repetition of consonant sounds found at the ends of words For example, "knick-knack, paddy-wack,"
"bric-a-brac," "flip-flop"
Rhyme--also spelled "rime" rhyme
is the repetition of ending sounds between words; poems can have end rhyme, in
which words at the ends of lines rhyme; this is what we usually mean when we
say a poem "rhymes." A poem can also have internal rhyme, in which
words inside of individual lines for example, "Go with the flow,
Joe."
The sounds used in a poem can effect its meaning and tone. The use of
consonants, vowels and rhyme can effect the way the reader feels about the
poem's subject matter; they can effect the poem's tone and reflect its
meaning. One should think of the sounds of letters in terms of the range of
feelings they may express. For example, lots of long vowel sounds accompanied
by soft consonant sounds may contribute to a tone of sleepy restfulness in a
poem. Short vowel sounds plus hard consonant sounds may express anxiety, quick
movement, anger or happiness.
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